don't be afraid

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Colombian Coke (Veteran Zoner) on Thursday, 15-Jun-2006 19:10:39

Dont be afraid
Of the thousands of clouds that adorn the blue sky
Of the gentle rain that falls like angel tears
Washing the earth to make it grow and produce many fruits
Don't be afraid my child
Of the mighty winds that break your dreams
Of the earth shaking thunder
Of the lightning that blinds you with its powerful light
Of the hail that falls like snow on the grassy fields
Don't be afraid for it is God's mighty work
That speak louder than words
Making the earth shine with its unfailing love
Dont be afraid my child
Just sleep tight for it will no't hurt you
For soon the call of the bird will announcing the break of dawn
Sleep tight my child and I will sing you a song
Sleep tight for God's love will be with you untill the end of the ages.

Post 2 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Thursday, 15-Jun-2006 21:18:03

nicely written. good work.

Post 3 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Thursday, 15-Jun-2006 21:34:10

I like it.

Post 4 by God's Child (Generic Zoner) on Thursday, 15-Jun-2006 23:17:14

Yira, the flow is excellent, and the meaning isclear.

Post 5 by poet (The premium poet) on Friday, 16-Jun-2006 0:51:29

indeed. nicely written. write more.